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Age : 34 Posts : 1138 Join date : 2012-01-04 Location : With my lovely Celty~
| Subject: Llama's English homework Fri Mar 23, 2012 5:24 pm | |
| lol, go figure, I get this back from my teacher marked and he doesn't get it. Well I did write it for a specific fan-base, and now I'd like to know what you all think. http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7833743/1/Hunt PLease leave me a review here. Anon or not I don't care, just PLEASE let me know what you think
HuntSmoky high-twenty summer air. Steel scraped pavement, running and running. Trapped. Index and thumb extended at hunter as car headlights revealed his prey. Unreachable. Throw dodge. Park bench pulled from steel bolts, Goliath cowered. Hurled dodged again. They're at it again.
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