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PostSubject: Vladimir character   Thu May 24, 2012 12:51 am

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Name: Vladimir
Gender: male
Age: 16
Eye color: red
Hair color: black
Clothes: black sweater, sweat pants
Height: 5'4
Weight: 140
Personality: kind, loves to read, draws, can't hit girls and trys to make friends with everyone.
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PostSubject: Re: Vladimir character   Thu May 24, 2012 6:27 pm

I can't accept this character until we know more. All you've given us is an outline, which is a starting point to creating an OC. Flesh him out more. What are his pet peeves? What is his past? Does he have any strengths or weaknesses? Why can't he hit girls? If he just polite or was he raised that way? How did he learn to draw? It's these details, and many more, that create a well rounded and believable character that others would like to interact with.

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PostSubject: Re: Vladimir character   Thu May 24, 2012 10:00 pm

He learn to draw from his father who died when he was young and before he died his father always told him, respect woman never treat them bad and after he died, he wanted to follow his father's words. So he would never hit a woman, he hates to see men mistreat their lovers and he lives with his mother who has two jobs to support them. He's great at writing because he pays a lot of attention to classes but he sucks at pe classes, so he hates to run laps do he would hide under the bleachers with some friends. He prays with his fathers shine every night and helps his mom with her chores, he loves to help others with his home word and always seems to make friends. He wants to do badly wants to follow in his father footsteps that sometimes he loses sight of who he is. He is afraid to be with anyone because he's afraid of being hurt or hurting some like how his father died and his mother was heartbroken but above all that, he always wants to be happy and smiles all the time to get others to smile.
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PostSubject: Re: Vladimir character   Thu May 24, 2012 11:34 pm

This isn't what we meant by 'flesh him out'. Redo the entire character submission. Everything. Take a look through other peoples OC's to see how it's done for tips and pointers.

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PostSubject: Re: Vladimir character   Fri May 25, 2012 3:10 pm

Ok, I'll read others then rewrite the whole thing on paper then try again, do u want me to delete this whole post?
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PostSubject: Re: Vladimir character   Fri May 25, 2012 5:56 pm

No it's fine, you can just edit the first post.

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