Drrr x hunger games|| part one || Opinions?

Hey there~
I have recently been writing a DRRR!! Ver. Of the hunger games, (which I am still writing) and I just thought I'd post this little bit of the first part for opinions and stuff.... So here we are, part one of this unnamed fanfic~

『一』First 『一』
"Kasuka. Kasuka Heiwajima."
The words were amplified by the microphone she spoke into.
My mind was numb. So we're my hands; feet. Everything. Numb.
My only thought was "no".
Even now, all I could remember from that moment, is a hazy jumbled mess.
I was running; I threw off the peacekeepers that prevented me from moving. The only way to stop this; the only way to stop my brother from... From...
"I volunteer! I-I volunteer..."
Then the peacekeepers grew less violent. They pulled me along the path; a space between the boys and girls, some I knew well, some I didn't know at all. It was lined by peacekeepers. More and more peacekeepers. Don't they have anything better to do than... Being a peacekeeper? When the four (or more I guess; I wasn't really keeping track) of the peacekeepers that were leading me threw me onto the stage. I looked out into the crowd.
I saw my brothers face.
Kasuka's face.
His eyes were dead.
『二』Second『二』

I'll post some updates here as I go~

I like this idea. And your style of writing. Good job! ^^b

The idea sounds great! I can't wait to read more!!

Be sure to put a link in when you post the first chapter so I can alert it~ *wants to read more~*