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 Natsuki Nakahara's Character Needs Approval!!

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PostSubject: Natsuki Nakahara's Character Needs Approval!!    Mon Jun 11, 2012 9:04 pm

Name: Natsuki Nakahara
Age: 22
Gender: Female
Occupation: Natsuki works as a masked vigilante. She helps with white collar crimes, and comes across the occasional gang war. She's known around Ikebukuro as the 'Mask' because...well, she wears one. Some believe her to be the Headless Rider, but only a select few know the truth.
Gang (optional): N/A
Physical Appearance: Natsuki has long, snow white hair and electrifying blue eyes. She has a slender body that is lean with muscles. She usually tends to skinny jeans, form fitting tank tops, and her knee high, black leather combat boots. Her hair is always down.
Eye color: Blue
Hair color/style: Never put up, hair color is snow white
Height: 5.9 ft
Clothes: (Explained Above)
What brings them to Ikebukuro? Natsuki came to Ikebukuro, after being doposited into a local trashcan by a gang leader she can't seem to remember. After, finding a shelter and a new identity, she began working as a vigilante. She now has two identities; the Mask and Natsuki Nakahara. Natsuki tries to keep to herself and is a stubborn, loudmouthed blunt bastard who isn't afraid of anything.
Other: N/A
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PostSubject: Re: Natsuki Nakahara's Character Needs Approval!!    Mon Jun 11, 2012 11:25 pm

I have a few issuse with this character
'Masked vigilate's' do not solve white collar crimes, they attack random muggers/rapists/etc. They go after blue collar crime.

I don't see why she would be confused for the headless rider either as the headless rider is... well... headless. Sorry but there is no mask that makes me think someone is headless and her and Celty have obvious physical differences and I honestly do not think anyone would confuse them.

You mentioned what she wears but when she's 'vigilante' is she wearing the same thing?

Snow white hair and blue eyes when she lives in japan is also a bit strange, please explain how it happened. Is she albino? Foreign?

You mention she lives and functions as Natsuki Nakahara usually but you can't make money being a vigilante and with no money that means no shelter, food, water, clothing or... well, anything.

How is it too that she needs to forge a new identity when she doesn't remember just being attacked? Does she have complete amnesia? If so is she still trying to find out who she really is? Or does she just forget getting thrown in a garbage can? She still needs some work before I can accept her.

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