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| Subject: Brie's character (Waiting for approval) Thu May 31, 2012 3:20 am | |
| Name: Scarlet Morrow
Age: 16
Gender: Female
Occupation: 10th grader at Rairi Academy and lives with a room mate in a small apartment. She helps pay by working part time at a corner store.
Gang: None at the moment, but she's wanting to join the yellow scarves if she has the opportunity.
Physical Appearance: She has a naturally tanned olive skin and a broad chin and strong facial features. She doesn't care for her appearance as most other people do, but she takes the time to put on eyeliner and mascara. Her hair is either down and natural or in a plain french braid, and she cuts it herself which sometimes results in mistakes like a chop out of her bangs.
Eye color: Hazel
Hair color/style: Thick asian bangs and wavy hair to her back. She's naturally brunette, but dyes her hair a black with a purple shine.
Height: 5'4
Clothes: Consists of mainly dark jeans, plain dark shirts, and various vans-like sneakers. She can't afford to buy new clothes often, so the old jeans she brought are rolled up into ankle high capris.
What brings them to Ikebukuro? Tired of living in her small town, she's always wanted to see a city. As a gift for scoring the 2nd highest in all her tests, her parents bought her a trip to Ikebukuro. She hadn't stayed a day before she fell in love with the city. She couldn't imagine going back to her town, and even when her parents don't accept her decision she's decided to stay for good. Her town was so quiet, Ikebukuro came as a shock at first, but she soon caught the rhythm of the city and all she's wanted to dig further into its roots and find out all the secrets.
Other: Living alone is natural for her, her parents were usually always off at work and as the only child she's learned to care for herself. While her parents supposedly love her, she guesses they'd spend time with her instead of sending her to different places as a reward. While she works to keep her grades up, she's never been with the crowd that does the same. Her friends in middle school were all in a small gang, and being the smallest they'd always get pushed around and lose fights more than often. She'd wanted to join herself, but seeing how unsuccessful they were she never joined, and joining another gang would mean losing her friends, so she was mutual with everyone. She had fighting experience as a child and got to a brown belt in karate, while she doesn't know how to handle any weapon she's capable of defending herself. Most of the times when her parents were gone overnight she'd spend walking around at night aimlessly, waiting for something to happen that might make her life less everyday, even if it meant making it less bearable.
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Age : 35 Posts : 1500 Join date : 2011-11-29 Location : That's up for debate
| Subject: Re: Brie's character (Waiting for approval) Thu Jun 07, 2012 5:12 am | |
| You've described her as asian but given her a western name(including family name) It doesn't fit. Either adapt her name or name her nationality/country of origin/where her parents first came from or if she's half japanese/half something else. otherwise well done. Fix that and I will accept her. | |
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| Subject: Re: Brie's character (Waiting for approval) Thu Jun 07, 2012 12:00 pm | |
| Oh sorry, I meant it as her bangs to be an asian bangs cut, she isn't asian herself. |
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